All Comments on 'The Very Best of Friends'
by xelliebabex
- 12 Comments
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoI enjoyed the story as a whole. For a few pages it seems like there are two characters named Joanna, which is rather confusing. Some obvious spelling and grammar errors too.
Nemo18almost 8 years agoThink you have a decent story here however the amount of spelling and grammatical errors mad Roy really difficult. The two character named Joanna, the incorrect gender pronoun usage and other things kept this from a higher rating. I hope you will utilize an editor or proofreader in the future.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoI really liked the story up until Joanna and Matt split up, I was rooting for them to make it to the altar. Struggled with the story from there till the then. Sorry I didn't like the ending.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoQuit reading after a page. Too difficult to follow with the names. Joanna & Joana. Thought they were at Melanie's. Help your readers follow the development of the story. Not on par with your usual submissions.
ezbodover 7 years agoIt would be easier to stay silent and move on, and read something else, but this has been The WORST story that I have EVER read. It seems to me that the writer had no idea where the story was headed.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoThe Joanna/Joana problem killed the story for me. It made parts of the story too confusing to read.
ender2k2kalmost 5 years agoThanks. I hope you are doing well and I am looking forward to the next “12 Tables” chapter.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoThe errors mentioned were not insurmountable, but I did spend some time wondering why studying flora and fauna would be a feature of a wedding. The word for nudist is "naturist" (unless Australia thinks differently). But a good story, nevertheless.
Hope you are well.
Anonymousover 4 years agoThe numerous spelling and grammatical errors, together with the two distinct characters named Joanna, frequently made the story hard to follow. The story line was also pretty strange at the end. The abrupt break-up between Joanna and Matt was totally weird. It was not surprising that they would have a fight, but it made no sense at all that neither one would make any attempt to come back together, given the intensity of their relationship and the positive things that had come out of it.
Anonymous10 months agoAlthough it’s a romance I think it should have been put in different category I was disappointed ☹️
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