All Comments on 'The Virgin Blowjob Queen Pt. 02'

...of "The Virgin Blowjob Queen," which was the re-write of "Keeping the Secret."

I liked "Keeping the Secret" better than the re-write six months later, and I liked it better than this second chapter of the revised story. Having Debbie tell Joe in advance that she's going to do something specific and then just "accidentally" going with things as they get more and more out of hand and telling Joe later is more of a turn on than having them discuss everything in advance.

Now that they are rich, they can do this sort of thing for fun rather than a sense of duty to their relationship or a client. I look forward to more stories with hot Debbie's getting carried away.

Love the Debbie stories, this was a good continuation. Great to see you writing again.

She is obviously in need of humiliation and how can hubby trust her again?

And so glad to see you keep writing.

More please

The key I this to Debbie's stories, what I think is, the humiliation of Debbie being consensual on her part and non-consensual from his part. Keep your focus on developing her conversations.

Please make another Debbie story

pt2, please!

Been a while since your last update. Hope you haven't retired. I check every day for a new story.... if you have quit, thanks for all the good stuff. If you haven't -- I look forward to the next installment of this or any of your other series. Forget about the dopes who add comments just to complain. They can spend their time reading other authors.

I love how your characters are verbally humiliated and enjoy it. I have mixed feelings about their men not being as into it. I hope you post more soon - the chicks seem to enjoy the treatment and hopefully their men will figure out how to add to the chicks pleasure by humiliating her more

This is a crap story. Don't waste your time reading it. For an experienced lawyer and his lawyer wife to get duped so easily shows the contempt the writer shows towards us readers. Total rubbish.

I hope you have not retired because I love reading your stories, especially this character.

I hated the end to this story. Hated it!

This was a great addition for a great character. Please add more.

Time to get his Louieville slugger and beat Butch to death.not to mention the rest of his ream. That would make a great other chapter. Right now it’s just cuck shit.

please, a supposedly well educated couple of lawyers fall into a trap sex with other well educated layers. I know its all fantasy but it needs something close to reality. I didn't finish all b4fayd

There are women like her out there. I’ve know women that are very intelligent that get aroused being treated like whores. Easy to get them to suck your cock if you treat them like they don’t have a choice.

Wife like her can be fun if you keep them entertained and fed. For humiliation I found hung blackmen and exposed her to them. I loved undoing the snaps on her Levi shirt and showing her big tits off. Then watch as she started sucking.

Great story & if some aspects were a little outlandish, think the central premise holds true & matches experiences of my wife before & after we met. She thought nothing of giving head & swallowing on a simple date & she throughly enjoyed submitting to being a sex toy to more than a few partners. Indeed when I first met her (& banged on the first night) she was regularly heading for weekends in Paris to submit to being used a plaything by her French lover in her every hole. Although don’t know the French for cock-sucking c**t

Looking forward to further installments

They'd still be scraping Debbie and butch's teams brains off the walls if this happened to me

Half the things he said she’d never done happened in the first chapter. Hilariously bad.

For supposedly being a smart lawyer, she sure seems like a stupid naive whore. And how is this guy a lawyer, that made partner by age 35, then peeled off and right away start his own successful firm, yet so stupid and such a pussy? It doesn't take a genius to sue the other lawyer for harassment, and have him taken off the case for the shit he's saying or the photos he's sent or shown. It's not rocket science to have him disbarred for propositioning his wife to make a deal. And it doesn't take a lot of balls to tell your wife you want a divorce when she made the deal, went through with the deal, added to the deal, and was visually caught, THEN just continued like it was nothing. And for her to act all butthurt because he's pissed off because she decided anal isn't a big deal, especially when she hasn't even offered it to her husband. At this rate, it's only a matter of time before she accepts "intercourse," because that should be formalized, as no big deal. Should have gone with a burn the bitch ending. That would fit the Loving Wives genre better. This is just a cuck story.

Here is what would happen in the real world:

Case thrown out for collusion

All attorneys involved disbarred

All previous cases involving the law firm will be vacated

Settlements against the law firm bankrupting the law firm

Criminal charges against all attorneys with jail time

Law firm closed

Television special blasting the criminality all over the air waves.