All Comments on 'The Virgin Bride'

I have a new favorite..at least in the category of Anal. Incredible romance concept that actually made me feel a part of the triumphant relationship that can only be found in stories where characters are developed beautifully through boundries and exploration. I didn't make it through the wedding night without the emotion you convey overwhelming me. This is an excellent piece. thank you for taking the time to share your imagination. My vote: 5

I am awaiting your next endeavor.

I like how you made this a love story. The sex was still hot, but it was also loving. Not something you usually see in an anal story. Great work!

will male her wet and him erect.

Nice sex scenes. Nice build up. Nice payoff!

Agree with the contributor who said romantic anal... loved the build up, loved the female character, loved the way she gradually came to terms with anal sex... LOVED the bath scene! Terrific.

Loved the text, it was romantic as well as hot. And especially great was the lenght of the text, a real story to enjoy.

extremely long and thorough buildup, gradually getting more and more exciting and the end certainly did not disappoint. Thanks

One or two typos in the midst of a beautiful story.

Poconos. Not Pokonos.

Also the movie references went a little far. Okay for context, but no need to make them part of the story.

I'm getting to think Charles Petersunn is a master writer. This story is just incredible -- romantic, erotic, richly sensual.... can we ahve more?

nice build up, romantic throughout, but on wedding night..no foreplay..no lovemaking..only anal fuck... lady deserved an orgasm..tchh-tchh

I love anal stories, and this is one of the best

Overall it was okay, pretty good at some parts. Although, I felt that the descriptions and some of the words used were rather repetitive and childish at times.

anal sex, but this story progressed so naturally from reluctance to acceptance with obvious love - it really was a gift - that I could almost place myself in the scene. The fact that it was a gift from her to him could reduce the desire for her to experience orgasm too, and not every sexual encounter need have mutual release, but somehow, I feel that on this occasion, her orgasm would have made the union complete. I liked the story, but I just don't have the same obsession with anal sex, and I think it is rather degrading for women no matter how spicy it may seem at the time.

I loved the wedding night scene, specially the way she gives herself to him... and the initimate anal scenes when he's inside her bottom..

I don't know if I'm happy that she gave herself an enema first. Almost better if the sex is a bit dirty. Or maybe she could have asked him to give it to her... or maybe not, if it's a gift.

OK, I loved it. MORE, please!

THis was the most boring story I have every read, I am sorry I actually read it to the end

Deliciously tactile and visual. Very plausible thoughts for the characters.

Very realistic for the characters perspectives & the description of sensation for the woman, lucky girl!

Amazingly good!

I liked this story a lot and I thought it was sweet. I did think the characterization of Alec was lacking, and I'm not sure we need to know what he thinks. I'm not really sure the author knows more about him than that he's nice and he wants anal sex, to be honest. To me, the story is about a romantic girl, and I don't really think we need to know more about Alec than that he's the man she loves.

Now I gave that 3 stars, I would never try to put my penis in my wives anus, that is the sort of thing homosexual men do to each other, not respectively married couples, I had frequent vaginal- penis sex with my wife for more than 30 years, that was always great fun, no other way.

You did a marvelous job. Very few can describe in such details.

very realistic as she didnt climax from anal fuck ib her first time which happens in most of the anal fantasies

you captured every fine details of both reluctant lisa and horny alec kudos

Excellent

Many years to late but I still feel the need to comment.

I love this story sort of innocent, but i must confess that some of the opening thoughts about anal being dirty (and that only sluts did that kind of thing) had me expecting her to embrace that part of taking anal. She ultimately did, but she didn’t truly get off on it. I was hoping for a little dialogue down the stretch. There was perfect opportunity (her in her wedding dress getting fucked up the ass) to simply ask her how if she like it? How it feels (emotionally) to get fucked up the ass on your wedding night? Where he should cum? Same place but make her say it. Nothing too graphic or raunchy - just reminding her of the situation and seeing where that takes her. Thanks

asked her how she felt