by VanillaExtract
Can't wait for the next part!!! I love you VanillaExtract!! Please write more!!!
Really was not sure after the first chapter - I read your work for the father/daughter content. But after this one, consider me hooked! Canโt wait for chapter 3
Thank you, breakingtheimpossiblecode. I'm trying something a little new with this one. I hope you stick with it and enjoy it just as much as my other stories.
Thank you, Anon. Much love back at you!
I liked this one better than the last one. I especially liked how Quinn was sassing her mother and her aunt while trying to remain supportive of Ginny. I hope that Ginny rebels against them really good and makes love to Brent...er....Beau. She deserves to have what she wants and to hell with the family hens. Scored 4/5
You created much suspense and nervous anticipation in this chapter with Ginny and her relatives, along with the appropriate doubts and tensions--so well done. 5
ST, Thanks! It's an interesting situation, almost like an arranged marriage...
Anna, thank you. I hope this story keeps the bar high and you enjoy all of it!
Comenarista, here we have Brent, feeling like he hit the lottery with this job, and on the other side of the spectrum, Ginny, who feels like she lost it. Or did she...
I really like stories like this; stories that set the scene clearly and is populated with well-defined characters. The suspense of what will / might happen (will Virginia rebel against tradition?... will Brent be able to follow the rules?...) A well-written story so far. On to the next chapter! 5/5*
I loved the drama of Ginny not being into the virgin ceremony, but the ceremony itself definitely screams cult. Having read your other stories, I am looking forward to the rest of the chapters.