All Comments on 'The Virgin Ceremonies Ch. 11'

I love this story. I can’t believe I’m crying from a story on literotica! Though I’ve never experienced this, you’ve written it so beautifully that it feels like I just did. My heart just breaks for Brent ;(

I want more, please dont drop this series.

You have written it excellent..plz continue. Next one asap

Dude, I don’t know if you’ve sold your soul to the devil, or what, but the quality of writing on this story is of a completely different caliber from the others. Seriously moving stuff, man. You should be proud.

Hi, Anon. I love your tears! I've succeeded in writing something that connected with you. Thank you :)

Hi KMSBHF. No worries, I promise all 22 chapters will be coming your way right here on Lit.

Hi YSS166! Thank you for sticking with it! Coming soon, Chapter 12, Virginia: A Full Refund

Hi Anon! What a nice compliment. Thank you so much. The devil is always over my shoulder when I write erotica, lol. With TVC, I edited a lot more (200 hours) compared to most of my other stories. TVC is also about 5x as long, so it was a lot more work, but I took the time to rewrite and polish it as a proper novel. I'm glad you could tell the difference! It makes the work worthwhile.

Just wow! I did not see that last paragraph coming. Wonderful story!

Brent's rant at the end was really freaking excellent. 👌 He gave Ginny exactly what she had begged him for. I can't wait for her to replay his words over and over in her head, awakening to the sincerity and deeper meaning within them. You can run kid, but you can't hide. She's totally besotted and totally in denial...both. 😻

Okay, so I just now read the title of Chapter 12 in your comments below. I KNEW IT!!!! I just fucking knew that when he slipped her the envelope while she was in the shower that he had given her back the $10,000.00!!! It was the very first thing that came to mind when I read it!🤩😍😇🙂

Hi, Anon! Thank you for the wonderful comment! Yes, in that last paragraph, Brent has had it up to here ⬆️❗ It's always my philosophy that happy endings have to be earned. You'll have to keep reading to see if these two earn it 😉

Hi ST. Brent's words will definitely come to haunt her! These two will have to fight a lot more if they want to want to connect again. We'll see... Okay, no spoilers, but IF you're right about the title chapter and the envelope, big IF, I'll take a pat on the back for skillful foreshadowing😜 the best chapter titles are either fun or pun 😎

PS I had to look up the definition of besotted, you're spot on! 😅

You hit us all with a sledgehammer when Brent stared her down and slammed her with his hard-hitting words. Just like she would get pissed off at him that night and call him back, now those words will wrack her conscience for days and weeks to come.

You paint a very touching and detailed picture of how much he pours his soul into loving and pleasing her, and when she lets herself truly feel, it flows out of her too. You specialize in torture, Mister. 5

Com, i specialize in torture!? That's the nicest thing anyone's ever said to me 😅

I didn't knew Brent became John Cena LOL

Texan's comments hit nail right on the head! He gave her exactly what she wanted knowing she would get pissed. She will probably realize that later. As for the envelope, I think he's returning the money he was paid, telling her she meant more to him than the money ever would. I hooked. Reading on. 5⭐ Rafe.

I'm ordinarily a fan of harder genres, anal, incest, loving wives (the generous kind, not the BTB kind). It's all about that taboo giving the stories that extra zest. But somehow, you're throwing enough obstacles in the path of true love to mimic that same thrill.

Keep it up and good health to you!

My favorite part of the story so far