All Comments on 'The Virgin Ceremonies Ch. 17'

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ScottishTexanScottishTexanalmost 2 years ago

I knew that they were going to screw with Brent through his grandmother. And I don't believe for a second that they will put everything back in place if he walks away. They started a ball rolling and can't afford to back off without losing their own credibility. Sadly evildoers like this exist for real. I hated reading this installment, but I will still give it a high rating. 5/5

nthusiasticnthusiasticalmost 2 years ago

I’m still banking on Nana coming through for Ginny in the end, although it looks like a long shot that’s getting longer every day. Poor Brent, held hostage by his love for his grandmother and Max. I sincerely hope Ginny learns how to grow a spine, understanding actions have consequences.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanalmost 2 years ago

Having had a few hours to digest this, it occurred to me that the best way to fight back against this matriarchy might be to join forces with Quinn if she gets enough backbone to fight for her own life as well. Quinn's relationship with her current boyfriend has been attacked as well. If the two of them combine forces and threaten to reveal everything by going public, then they just might have a chance to turn the tables.

17 down and 5 more to go.

VanillaExtractVanillaExtractalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Hi ST, like Ginny said, they really are evil. The girls really could destroy their mothers if they went public. What a scandal! I wonder if Quinn would have the spine for it... Nah!

Hi, Nthusiastic, maybe you're on to something. We'll see. I know it all feels hopeless now, but stick with me. We're building to the exciting climax and the stakes are getting higher and higher!

Next chapter... Brent: The Nuclear Option!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Really intense and thrilling. I am looking forward to the next chapter(s).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

And just think.....there are people out there that are just like them. Interested in only money and power, and how they can get more of both, regardless of who they have to destroy to get it. If I didn't know better, I'd say this was a story on some tabloid. Well done! 5⭐ Rafe

Fenris420Fenris4204 months ago

Yup. As expected. 😕 5/5*

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