All Comments on 'The Virgin Ceremonies Ch. 21'

I love this I do hope she finishes law in LA or somewhere and does art there’s great artists in advertising or even in comics

This was a ridiculously long series for a pretty paltry payoff.

Is this the end?

Seems like Aunt Olivia and Mom would just contrive to have him framed for a crime and arrested?

Earlier in the story, Virginia expressed a desire to be a DVM. I hope that she follows that dream instead of becoming a lawyer. I guess that we'll have answers in the final chapter next week.

Someone else commented that the payoff seemed miniscule compared with the amount of time it took you to get here. This is what I have been preaching to you for the past 5 months or so. The short one and two page releases every week almost drove me to permanently walk away from this story entirely and revisit it again in 6 to 9 months. Indeed, I ignored it for a complete month somewhere before the reveal to Ginny.

In spite of whatever your perception is, this short tease format is not a good idea.

I'll be glad to see next Friday get here so I can drop the 'follow' and get back to other stuff.

"And he never did."

WTF...?

If it ends here, I want my frigging investment back

Question for VanillaExtract?

Do you have more?

Hey Oz. I think they have a bright future ahead of them. Stay tuned for the last chapter!

Hi, Alberto. Thanks for sticking with it.

Hi Anon, one more chapter to go! We'll have to wonder how crazy Olivia is but fortunately Nana can keep her in check. For now, Olivia's part in this story is done...

Next Week THE FINAL Chapter 22: Brent: A Little Trust

Hey, ST. I know you weren't a fan of the short chapters, but thanks for sticking with it anyway

Hey Anon x2. Yes, 1 more chapter to go!

i almost lost it when it started with 6 years later, but glad for a somewhat juvenile moving forward.