All Comments on 'The Voyeur's Apartment Complex'

Great story, well written and kept me hard throughout. Hope to read more about this apartment complex.

Change Sheldon back to Stephen, otherwise, a potential good "first chapter".

Either porn or settle down and be setting for a mystery. Greatly crafted story.

Alwaystaboo

Loved the set-up.. looking forward to reading the next chapter

The mystery, intensity, and erotic attention was spot on. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to hear more from a great story teller.

The buildup was just the right length, I would love to hear more from these circumstances, a chance to enjoy his neighbors as well.

Loved this one. And I have to agree with the others. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

Don't know if you have ever seen the movie, but you might want to check out "Sliver", starring Sharon Stone. (Based on the novel "Sliver", by Ira Levin.)

You did a nice job of writing your story, but the premise is eerily similar.