All Comments on 'The Waitress'

Loved this story! Slow sexy buildup, great fucking! Very well written.

It looks like there may be another chapter?? Please? Keep up the good writing.

A really great sex scene- you kept it going and going

Welcome back LA !

Looking forward to more of your stories :)

BBE

Now thats what I call a grate storie .Hope to see a lot moor from you

Well L A - you've done it again - lets have some more chapters on these two lovebirds - I'm sure she is going to get pregnant to her Daddy

Your stories are lovely L.A.! It is my plan to read them all!

It was just outstanding, L.A.!!! You have some pretty impressive fans. Jena121 is quite a writer herself and I certainly agree with her opinion about this story. I, too, would like to read more about these two. Thanks for all of your stories. You are one of the best.

Great story. Keep it up.

good but the beginnings bad i got through like half of it without even knowing the waitress was his daughter

This is a really good story, with a lot of possibilities. I want to point out two things that would make it better, at least for me. Use your spell checker and edit your copy before publishing. And, one thing I don't understand in so many stories here, not just in this one, is why would a man want to call a beautiful woman who loves him and makes love to him (and in this case is also his loving daughter) a bitch, whore, and other ugly names? For me, it takes a lot away from the story.

Im wondering how it could be better but I think only if I was there.

Your descriptions of activities are always phrased well and turn your readers on, for sure. Thank you for writing.

This was a great start. The next chapter is what does her husband do knowing he's going to be losing his meal ticket? I think I can relate to how they feel, but it's only a fantasy. So far.

What was the secret

WOW! What a story. Hardly breathed all the way through it! Very well done!

Extremely exciting and erotic just loved it.