All Comments on 'The Walker Colt: Billy's Tale'

This was a really good story! Great imagination and plotting. Thanks for the hard work. (Where did they bury the survivors?)

I don't ordinarily think of Literotica for my western tales, but you have changed my mind. This was an excellent story for ANY site, and I hope to see the Colt tell you more. I gave it 5 stars because I couldn't give it six.

and thank you Randi.

I really enjoyed this tale and I hope to read more as the Colt speaks to you.

One of my favorites so far!

The employees are reaching for their sidearms just because someone enters the store?

Let's see, Randy FUCKS two women in the marriage bed while they are "happily" married, and she's supposed to worried about his feelings now that they're getting divorced?!

A haunted pistol. What more could you ask for?

Boyd Percy

I hope the imagined Walker Colt speaks more. It is a real shame that Brits can no longer own handguns. I have hundreds, but not too many made prior to metallic cartridges. Many inexpensive replicas available today are probably better and safer than the originals. Those are all I would actually fire. By the way, "restoration" usually destroys most of the value of original antique weapons. Shooting one would be unthinkable.

Whispers from a Colt

The author has created multiple pathways for future musings.

This could be interesting. Will we go to war? Develop a Texas ranch? Have more conflict with the bully? or, or, or, ?

Amazing story. Very well done.

I wish 10* were possible. More please.

Great story so far, I'm looking forward to reading more

concept. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing.

Added you to my favorite author list.

Will definitely be coming back for more.

Great job. 5*

Only a God fearing soldier, cop or citizen.... but not a soulless politician.

Great well written tale of the West. Thanks for sharing on Lit.

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A very nice tale. I think I saw Louis L'Amour reading over my shoulder. This is a series that needs to have more added. thank You!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

6*, now this is story telling at it very best. This story rivals qhlm1 and few others greats that I've dubbed "Masters-of-the-Quill".

I'm glad that this is ONLY your FIRST in the series. As short as this story is it rivals a L'Amour tale. Impressive enough to make my Favorite's lists - Hooyah, Salute!

You have created a canvas to tell Billy tales. More please.

Have you considered the 750 word genre?

Great writing

this is one hell of a fine story! Headed over to read the next installment.

Loved it.

Helluva tale

This story is a great idea that left me hungry for more.

A great piece of historical fiction. I'd buy the book, full price!

Thank you!

I'm so looking forward to seeing the next part.

Good writing. The narrative of Mexicans as bandits gets a bit old though. What else could they be after Texas, California, Nevada, Arizona and everything in it had been confiscated by a heavily armed occupier? And how would the occupier not be an army of bandits, according to the exact same selfrighteous set of moral standards? Anyway, 5x for the writing.

Five, five, five! Super content, super detail. One thought. If there were an unrestored, genuine Walker Colt, serialized and all, with accessories, that would be an amazing, priceless find. You might actually NOT want to restore it or clean it too much. Those actions might reduce its value!