All Comments on 'The Ward'

Sage is a handful much like Shakespeare's Kate. Let us hope Edmund is able to woo her with his good looks and charms. I fear the alternative suitor, Nicholas, will "Not Go Gentle into That Good Night." Apologies to Dylan Thomas

Intriguing so far. Please tell me more...

"A handful"... you know she was just enslaved, right? What do you fucking expect?

Loving the idea, but Edmund better change quickly if we're to believe him to be this nice guy everyone keeps saying he is.

This ended so abruptly that I was shocked and felt like I was cheated somehow. I really hope you continue this story and bring it to a conclusion. I loved the imagery and way you painted the scenes very good writing. I will explore your other stories.

Thanks for this one though please don't leave us all hanging.

There is so much left to say. please please carry on with the story and quickly!

The picture you paint is exquisite. Please continue the story, and soon. I would pay to purchase this story if it was a book. The characters are very well developed already and I appreciate the various unanswered questions hanging in the air.

All alittle far fetched...

Can't wait to read rest of it

I couldn't stop reading! Can't wait to see the rest of it!!

But since you're a talented writer I gave it a go. Nice job! I actually enjoyed it. It's nice to have a little mystery in one's life. Five stars. Go well, JB

Well written, taught and without any historical anomalies.

Definitely the start of a good tale from the days of yore!

Good start