All Comments on 'The Way Back Ch. 04'

While it seems a bit slow, I know that it is the only way you could tell this story properly. Looking forward to each new chapter and I appreciate your posting them in daily segments. I have my own ideas about who is behind his attempted murder but I think you will settle their hash fairly soon. Thank you for what you do.

this is one great read. Enjoying the way you are dealing with his memory returning in bits and pieces. Suspect soon we will know why he was mugged and another attempt will be made.

I like the slow buildup and letting the story unfold.. There are times for Short Stories, and times for the Long Stories. This is a nice story for when I have a rainy day by the fire and can read late .... at least until the next installment.

gets into bed with younger, beautiful women way too easily.

Still waiting for you to tell us it was Derek who hired the three guys i the red Toyota.

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He remembers that he's a Father, but has not yet seen his children? I'm done w/this rubbish.

I agree with the previous comment.

Which may become a novel.

I see that some of the crowd from LW are reading the story and calling the victim a Pussy, while asking to have all revealed as soon as possible. Did any of you read "War and Peace" or "Gone with the Wind" ?

You have a great story going just ignore the stupid comments. It is your story and by god you should tell it the way you want to.

As for me I will give you all 5's. :) I love a good story teller and you certainly make the grade there.

Jim

Like the fact that he is Finally moving on with his life. and trying to figure out what everyone's involvement was. Can't wait to read the Next Chapter.

I've thought it was Derek all along.

some interesting developments, but the dialogue was a bit choppy at times.

Great story, this is my first chance to take the time to read it. I figure Derek is the culprit arranging for Allan's "murder" because he needed the money to prop up his ailing business; I think Derek planned on seducing Ann and taking over Allan's fortune. Having Allan introduce himself to Derek and Ann just might toss a monkey wrench into those plans, huh? Don't know who Allan will end up or if Ann had anything to do with the attempted murder - depends on whether or not Derek and Ann were having an affair before Allan was stomped. Still time and room for many twists - looking forward to it. Thanks! 5 stars.

The progress from just meeting a new PA to platonic colleague to bed seemed almost sudden, including a craving for him after 10 years of psychologically disturbed abstinence? Well, it is Literotica and fiction.

I keep wondering why all the reticence about facing his former wife. But it helps build the angst/suspense.

You seem to have a natural talent for building individual characters

Good job

Paul in Oklahoma

Very well written and absorbing story. Going to the next chapter quickly.

A very engaging story that keeps getting better as it moves forward. Love the mystery that is building with each chapter.

@shango - 'bye, mind your fingers in the door.

The author's using his time & creativity giving us this FOR FREE! Give over fuckin' moaning!

Thanks for sharing

Dixon (UK)

Engrossing. The relationships though, seem vacuous and shallow.