All Comments on 'The Web Ch. 06'

Enough said i think in the subject!!!

Just finished your work....... has just the right amount of all ingredients. Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading other chapters of this story or others.

ugh.. it was good up till this kevin clown appeared... he's totally ruining the atmosphere

Why bring in kevin? Ruined all the dynamics of the story....

So instead of making a story out of Cathys next "secret" kink it was used to tell how boringly perfect Brad is. Cathy probably just tested Brad with a red herring.

Don't get rid of Kelly it's Kevin who's the fifth wheel.

It was a good thing describing Cathy and Kelly as being doubles with their indistinguishable language. Adding Kevin gives us two couples of twins and exposed that their is only two dialogue voices. Even mom and pop sounds like the rest of the boys and girls.

Kevin were called Kurt once. Not that I care it's just confusing.

You’ve still got my attention.

Another chapter in this marvelous romance story, with great characters and an excellent plot.