All Comments on 'The Wedding Planner Ch. 12'

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KoreavetKoreavetalmost 14 years ago
I got it all ready!

I'm gonnawait for the end before I open another chapter. I got the point a while ago.

late2thepartylate2thepartyalmost 14 years ago
Not much of a plot

This is getting even more tedious. A lot of sex isn't much of a plot, it's more like a list. It would be more interesting if the characters were better developed. Even if, the whole premise of getting "even" is thin. Why wouldn't these two split or swing, doesn't seem like hubby would really care. It seems to be time to either wrap this up or start over.

mcwiiimcwiiialmost 14 years ago
15 part series

A little hint, it does not get better.

ChagrinedChagrinedalmost 14 years ago
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ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ (siffle) (snort) (mumble -"I'll get a job in the morning, mom ahhhheemmmm") ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

hindsight2020hindsight2020almost 14 years ago
warhol

You know Warhol did some work like this. One was called "Sleep" It was an 8 hour film of someone sleeping. This is not as interesting.

halleynhalleynalmost 14 years ago
Getting even?

Unless the author is "getting even" with anyone misguided enough to still be reading this pointless drivel, why is he bothering to write it? IIt is boring, unduly repetitive, and the sex has all the eroticism of a brick wall. How long, O Lord, how long!

nyminusnyminusalmost 14 years ago
shame shame on you bobbie

shit is shit..In diherrea it just keeps on dribbling out

BoringOldGuyBoringOldGuyalmost 14 years ago
Last chance & JPB blew it

I decided to give JPB this last chapter to redeem the story line, or at least move it forward. Blah, blah, blah . . . just more of the same. I'm not wasting any more time on this series.

dcw222dcw222almost 14 years ago
gettn boring

this story started out pretty good but I'm affraid its gotten very boring. I hope the end is near.

bobby9909bobby9909almost 14 years ago
3 more before it dies

He's got 3 more of these chapters to go before it finally dies a miserable death. You can stop the pain now if you go to SOL...

Sorry, JPB. But this is NOT a good story. You can do SO much better.

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpetealmost 14 years ago
Hey folks, just read every third chapter and much of....

....the pain diminishes....not all, but much....

DWornockDWornockalmost 13 years ago
At least this chapter was different

so I gave it a 4.

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Just a Dirty Old Man (of course I have been one since I was thirteen)who likes to write about the things that I've seen and been exposed to in my life. There is a little bit of me in almost all of my stories and in some of them there is quite a lot. I leave it to the reader ...

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