All Comments on 'The Wedding Present'

How terribly erotic and sad all at the same time.

Beautiful in its tradgedy.

The language and the pacing are just perfect. It is breathless, hot, disturbing, painful: the events, and the way you describe them.

You provided a wonderful setting, wonderful visual.......I am turned on by this story, thank you.

I love all of your stories..............thank you

Hot!

I read a similar story once on CleanSheets that was also great, but this one's better still.

Really well written.

(Great handle too.)

Very, very good. and that's an understatement.

...this sort of "Me strong, you do what I want" story, but this one is so beautifully written that I had to write and compliment you on it. Your English is well above average, adventurous and perfect; your plotting and organisation of your material cannot be faulted; the gradual fusion of the wishes of the two protagonists is masterly; and the story-line itself drags out an emotional response from the reader - this reader, at any rate. I am a retired University professor of Academic Writing, and of Literature, and after 40 years in the job, I know what I am talking about. I am now going straight to your author page in the hope that there is more of your work to read. Thank you for so much pleasure. Freddy.

I loved the story, the plot was fantastic. Although I would've loved to see more of it. Still an awesome story.

That was awesome ! Part 2

This story if perfectly written, wow

Amazingly provocative, rawly sexy but so sad.

It's time they meet again. Please reunite them for another encounter. It's time!