by spaldan
But apparently Mark had a name-change operation on page two (or did someone named Matt join unannounced?).
This is a marvelous sexy story, told exactly as it happened??
The pace, dialogue and thoughts were perfect.
Must have more of this.
You are a real literary astist.
And you did it without foot long penises and DDD babes! Wish more authors showed that kind of judgment.
This has long been one of my favorite repeat reads on Lit. Cheers to one excellent story!
There are only 2 dudes in this story, right? Mark and the narrator, Kevin. So, why does Mark, brother to Jenny, suddenly become Matt, in the last paragraph?