All Comments on 'The Weekend Sleepover Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

I hope there is more to come

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Decently written

But apparently Mark had a name-change operation on page two (or did someone named Matt join unannounced?).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
More please!!!

And I would love to read about Mark too !

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 12 years ago
Great so far

Great so far, hoping to read more and he gets Jenny too.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
REALISM

This is a marvelous sexy story, told exactly as it happened??

The pace, dialogue and thoughts were perfect.

Must have more of this.

You are a real literary astist.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Very fucking hot!

And you did it without foot long penises and DDD babes! Wish more authors showed that kind of judgment.

TheIrishTuxTheIrishTuxalmost 8 years ago
Awesome

This has long been one of my favorite repeat reads on Lit. Cheers to one excellent story!

WinstanleyWinstanleyover 5 years ago
Keep the names of your characters straight.

There are only 2 dudes in this story, right? Mark and the narrator, Kevin. So, why does Mark, brother to Jenny, suddenly become Matt, in the last paragraph?

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