by HorniBunni
I am very surprised the story is very good. I will semd another comment when I am finished.
this is so much better than the previous chapters a lot more understandable
The confusion is in the past and you are crafting the characters and setting for a great story. I look forward to the upcoming chapters. Thank you for your commitment and for sharing your creative talent.
Yes this is what I want, romance, danger, imagery, scents that I know, familiar thoughts, ideas This is a very imaginative story, and it just bleeds romance.
thank you for writing this story