All Comments on 'The Wild Ride'

There is a chapter 2 coming right??? I definitely want to know what these two get up to!

exiting.. wish it continued onto sultry wild sex into remote corner of a beach or dingy motel

There will be a second part. I am waiting for some feedback from the inspiration for the story before I move on.

There will be no dingy motels in this story. He is a snob!

Yes, I agree... more please. This one certainly got me going!!

If u need feedback and inspiration here goes :)

On the drive back Eliza needs to get some momentum/power back in the story. He needs to concentrate and drive... Consider that the challenge. Tease him to appoint where he has to stop before he crashes. That would leave your characters parked near a bayou. Hope this helps. :)