by TamLin01
It was well written and I liked the descriptive language. The sex scene wasn't good, but the rest is great. They'll do well writing gothic lit and horror.
The sex was not good, it was great.
This clever writer understands that handling biological details indirectly, works. And the whole thing is refreshing.
There is only so much description of juices flowing, pain inflicted, and humiliation that the world of erotic stories needs. That pot is overflowing.