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All Comments on 'The Witch And The Inquisitor'

by Mortuis

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traci_eliottraci_eliotover 13 years ago
Delightful Naughty

Very well done - I liked this one! More please and many thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Interesting. Good "surprise ending" Good description. Leep them cumming

rosamundirosamundiover 13 years ago
Well written!

I really enjoyed your writing style as well as the plot. This tapped right into sexual fantasies I was ashamed of growing up but now embrace. The ending was a great surprise.

Please keep writing here!

needchocolatenowneedchocolatenowover 13 years ago
Very nice

Great tempo in building the tension. I'm hyperventilating!

Rosamundi... get back to work! Lord Randall is calling.

nitebyrdnitebyrdover 13 years ago
Such a delicious fantasy ...

I love this. You have such a talent for detail. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Ahh, 2nd person done right!

Interesting throughout the whole story and a good example of 2nd person perspective! Nice detail, and I'm always fond of a dominant that doesn't have to yell.

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I'm a strange combination of old-fashioned gentleman and utter perv. There are a lot of things I'm curious about, things I've never done in RL, things that I think I'd like, but can't be sure till I try them. I've written erotica off and on since microchips were made of flint....