All Comments on 'The Witch's Apprentice Ch. 03'

by AceJinxy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Interesting storyline, please continue!

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 5 years ago
Very hot. Really liked it.

But could have been longer.

But I'm glad I read it.

cmsheaffcmsheaffover 5 years ago
Nice story

I think a little more character development would help a lot. I get distracted by spelling mistakes. Like life for lewd and wraith for wrath. Otherwise I think the writing is good.

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