All Comments on 'The Witch's Dollhouse Pt. 02'

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KennyCumBucketsKennyCumBucketsover 5 years agoAuthor

You know these feel longer when I write them, like they'd take up more pages or something. Wonder why.

PaddlesPaddlesover 5 years ago

Keep going with the story tho this is really good even if the story may seem short to you

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Great story, needs more reverse gangbang action such as double pussy grinding or double facesitting or reverse bukkake

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Really great, keep going! Five stars!

Lit really doesn't have enough good stories with femdom reverse rape / reverse gangbang like this. Please, please, please keep going!

(P.S. I'm the same anon commenter that said your Japan story would be better if there was more explanation -- I feel like the horror category, women-as-dolls and supernatural theme herepretty much takes care of the "women not acting like women usually do" I had with your other story. More like this one please!)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Excellent story

Really good please carry on

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
so

are you going write more about the doll house or just leave us hanging like the rest of the writers in here

KennyCumBucketsKennyCumBucketsover 5 years agoAuthor
Update

Sorry it's taking so long, the next part is finished but I need to do a once over of the draft before it can be accepted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

When is the next chapter comingggggg?????

Great story btw

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

"Ha ha, I'm in danger."

-Phil

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Just some lazy loser who has nothing better to do with his life. Update 27/01/2021 Ok so, the process of writing the synopsis of all my story ideas is complete. So yaaaaay. Basically I can start writing stories again without much worry about losing the plot halfway through....