All Comments on 'The Woman in White'

Great story. Left us wanting more I'm sure. Keep on writing!

I love how you mix real life urban legends into a story that while tragic, has a happy albeit open ending. Who knows if Evan’s 2nd encounter with Annie will end up like the first? Who knows if this could end up being a bizarre and strange romance they attempt to make work? Who knows if one night he goes to meet Annie and she isn’t there, never making herself known to Evan again. As if the power of her tragic circumstance deny her the ability to ever find true lasting happiness or love again.

The humor you added with the realism that a person would think to themselves if ever in that situation was spot on as well. I loved Evan’s subconscious voice. Thanks again for the great story. Hope you continue it. I’ll be checking back now and again.

Love your style of writing. I have a similar one but by the sea, I am trying to write it like tone it down? But should I?

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