All Comments on 'The Woman Who Forgot Her Life'

Great story!

5

Wish it was me.

Sometimes I forget how much I like your stories, but by the time it comes to picking stars I always remember.

RONDE pulls off another masterpiece. Great, heartfelt story. Well written if a bit melodramatic on the vengeful Don part. Can't imagine having spent more than a decade in prison he'd come after her for the simple 2 year offense.

Simply outstanding!🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

What A_Bierce Said.

She made lemonade out of lemons

Thanks for writing

Great story. And a great ending. 5stars

Loved it Thanks

A bit on the fantastic side, but who cares. It was a good read and I enjoyed it. 5*

Interesting plot crafted into a good story

Well written piece that is definitely screaming for a conclusion. How does the meeting with her sister go? How does their relationship progress? Why had he not had anyone for six years? Some holes missing but not enough to keep me from giving it 5*.

Nice piece. Seems there's enough here for a sequel...

Thanks for sharing.

G

Wait a minute. Cindy Davis has been dead for 9 years. But Don Wilson goes to jail for 2 years (sometime after Katrina), works his way up the Dixie Mafia ( 2+ years ?), goes to prison for another 15 years due to the undercover cop, and has been out for 1 year before finding Cindy. That's 9 vs 20+ years. Did I miss something?

Despite the other over critical comments the story made sense in a fictional way. Getting Cindy's identity back from declared dead would take some time and effort. That being said, those efforts are not I portant to the romance.

I like the plot but just wondering when the story is going to be finished? Terrible ending if it's finished 😪

The time lines really suck but the story is interesting for the most part. The ending seemed rushed, but that is often the case in short stories.

Timeline:

Don Wilson had to have been sentenced *before* Katrina (Cindy was a witness at his trial), so perhaps late 2004. Say he came out in 2006. Say he rose to Mafia bigshot by 2008 and it was then he was reconvicted and sent down for 15. Add a year after getting out and we're in 2024 (in a story written in 2023!)

Cindy was declared dead in 2010 (five years after "vanishing"). That was nine years ago, so now it's 2019.

Still inconsistent, but not as bad as some are saying.