by conanthe
I love the series so far. But please reread and change the person, You're constantly switching between 1st and 3rd person.
I have loved the story so far.
Fantastic
I want more
Please continue writing
Love it
Joe
I really like the foundation you are basing this adventure/lesson on. The force be with you as you weave this erotic tapestry of life lessons. By all means keep this 5 star work alive and growing.