by sirhugs
I really like this story. I like the choice of first person perspective, because it really is all about self-reflection and coming to terms with ones own needs and desires, and the ways one may be deluding (and denying) oneself and your own best interests. So ultimately it is an interesting character study, connected to some good hot sex along the way. Good job!
I don’t think he’s going to be thinking about Mel nearly as much any more. I have to say I’m team Harriet no matter how unattractive she is. That girl looks like she can fuck. I hope there’s a sequel exploring that possibility.
I think he should get with both of them separately and together it could be mind blowing!!! Thanks.
Um, wow! Amazing writing and I truly was rooting for Harriet! Can’t wait to read more of your work