by viedogaems
I'm riveted. Layering on the mystery and the cause and effect of the day is really great, especially, weirdly, with the rival girl's ambiguous intentions. Is she a monster? Well, yes, but she's also not the mastermind, it seems. And she might even become an ally in a future loop? Why does Lucas's mom hate Sylvie so much? Is that something that can be mended? Why does no one do laundry in this world, except Sylvie's mother? So many mysteries! Looking forward to more.
That's an awesome sequel. Please continue to write. Thoroughly enjoyed both the parts :)
One often meets their destiny on the path they take to avoid it. In this case taking measures to avoid humiliation only leads to worse humiliation.
I'm really enjoying this. Please write more.