All Comments on 'The Wrong Movie Ch. 02'

Your writing gets better and better. What, oh what, will Mom do? Don't keep us waiting too long.

you rreally need to keep this story going!! i wanna know what happens so bad! please finish hehe

i wasn't expecting the mommy twist, what with rachael's all wanting to be a couple and all.

man the story was HOT but where is the rest of it you have got to continue the story i REALLY want to know what happened!

I really liked the way her thoughts were written by you. It added a lot to the brother/sister relationship. Having their mom catch them too was neat and led the way into Ch. 03.

But probably much more true to life than 98 percent.

Most of the stories I start here are so un-realistic that I don't even bother going beyond the fist paragraph

This is good work. Sexy but believable.

I hate it when that happens. Ok mom, fish or cut bait. Mmmmm I wonder what it will be...

Very very nice. five thumbs up

Loved yer work mate...I rated 5 star!!

This story was truly amazing!

I really enjoyed the story being told from the girl's point of view for once.

Only one tiny bit of advice, when you were writing about Rachael masturbating to thoughts of her brother you should have desribed in detail more about what she was doing and how she was doing it.

But anyways super awesome epic story!!!

at the end i was thimkimg OH CRAP!

Oh dear God.... it's the Overly Obsessed Girlfriend! D:

Keep these two together for Life. This is True Love.

I absolutely love the story, I really hope mom wont stop them or try to join in.

So far it's a love story, even if Danny has spent most of this chapter being an insensitive prick ( I mean, they shared their first time with each other and then he avoids her for a week? ), and bringing her into the relationship would reduce a great story to one more fap story...

Anyhow, I've loved most of your stories and hope to see more of your work and fantasies. =)

Mattias (Sweden)

THE PILL OR CONDOMS OR ANY KIND OF BIRTH CONTROL??????????? OR ARE THEY JUST LUCKY OR IS HE SHOOTING BLANKS. I HOPE MOM FINDS OUT AND HAS A TALK WITH THEM. HELP ME TO UNDERSTAND.......... LAROC OF AGES

Well the story is definitely interesting! I really like all the stuff going through her head during the post week, very realistic! ...and yep, brother is pretty much a douche for waiting a week to talk with her, damn!! Think I need to reread the first half of the ch. since I set it aside for days and forgot the movie scene.

....curious what mom actually heard, them talking? Obviously the sex was long over! ...or had mon been watching the whole time? Heh. Off to the next chapter. ....at least he wssnt acting like a total pussy when she wanted him this time, just a bit of a douche, lol.