All Comments on 'The Wrong Room Ch. 02'
by Dreamweaver594
- 16 Comments
albertaboyalmost 9 years agoThis is interesting, hope we don't have to wait too long in between the chapters.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agokeep it going, I had fun with your other stories, have read them all more than once. This has the look of another good one.
cliptoealmost 9 years agoFlash fiction to a T! Love how your character development and growth flows within the intrigue of the story line. Great work (once again)!
Cant wait for the next 'installment'
cliptoe
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoI REALLY ENJOY YOUR STORIES AND THIS ONE IS STARTING OUT GREAT AND I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO NEXT INSTALLMENT.
soreireialmost 9 years agoNormally shorties like this drive nuts but this has me really intrigued. I just wish you allowed voting this definitely deserves a 5* rating. Next chapter soon please!
Heisenhugalmost 9 years agoDefinitely agree, I wish rating were enabled so I could give it the solid 5 it deserves. Please keep the story going, it seems like it's about to get really interesting.
Dreamweaver594almost 9 years agoAuthormainly because I've found that in the past, on previous series, I've suffered from the capricious nature of some who choose to demean the creative work of others. Regarding feedback, the written response, however brief, is far more satisfying to any writer than the arbitrary choice of stars. So, thank you kind respondent, I appreciate you taking the time to support my work.
zazrix9over 5 years agothe interesting plot, could be made into s movie. seXi build up, can't wait for the sex
Rapier8757 months agoThis isvery intriguing, I just hope you finished the story and didn't abandon it mid-way...........
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