by MrsCanyon
But could have been filled out with a little more detail.
I still enjoyed it though!
as usual. I always get so sore after reading your stories - probably because I always read them three or four times through, and the effect each time is tremendous! I wonder if I could substitute Ron's name for mine next time I read it? You will know what I mean, Tracy, as my real name is somewhat similar!
What does it matter what ages the author decides to make his/her characters? Why do some people always want to criticise for the sake of criticising? I read, enjoy, wet myself, and revel in stories like this. I don't try to see how critical I can be. I suggest that the last commentator does the same.
Not one of your better ones. But still pretty good could have used some more detail. Almost felt like you were in a rush to finish it you left out some good details. Still enjoyed reading it though.
Yet again you come up with another great story - thank you - please keep writing