by shaunreagh
Your characters and description of the act were just great - thanks
now THIS is an "erotic coupling." i dont have the words to describe how much i enjoyed this story.
Very intense. Very erotic. And the ending was perfect.<p>
Thanks for sharing.
This maybe your best work on this site yet, Shaun. I loved this piece. You have such a gift for eroticism ... for creating those stolen, secretive, and thus incredibly arousing encounters. A tale of forbidden lust and steamy, breathless passion. Outstanding. You leave your readers breathless and gasping for more ...
There's something indescribably seductive about your writing style. Can't wait to read the rest of your work.
Your stories are written in a tone and style that no one else can seem to incorporate into their writings quite as well. I will read this story many more times in the near future!
This story is perfection. I've read ALL your stories, please do come out of retirement!
The way you write is just "chef's kiss" 🤌🏻😍 so sensual. Your writing is so alluring and beautiful and literarily pleasing to read. Keep writing! You've got both the talent and skills