All Comments on 'Their Own World Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
That’s it

She fucked up.

Honestly, I never EVER understood this idea of making somebody jealous to get them to act up on their feelings. How is hurting someone supposed to make them want to be loving towards you??! This is just sick.

Professor_ChaosProfessor_Chaosover 5 years agoAuthor

I completely agree with you. It comes from Katie's ignorance on relationships and on her end, she still isn't sure if her brother cares about her that way. Basically, she's a young girl and makes a mistake but the point is they're better than to let something like that stop them. I assure you she makes up for it almost immediately in the following chapter.

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It's been a year since I started writing mainly erotica. I've had many story ideas over the years and life always seemed to get in the way of sharing them with others. Then I decided to use it as a way of clearing some space in my brain as well as therapy. Now it's an active ...

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