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by ElectricBlue

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stickygirlstickygirlover 3 years ago
So that's where they went

The paper might be yellow, but the sunlight will never fade

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 3 years ago

Very poetic, well done duet.

Thanks for sharing.

VitriolhackVitriolhackover 3 years ago
Cute

Very cute story; lovers craving for each other’s flesh always makes a better story than the act of consuming it!

MountainMiscellanistMountainMiscellanistover 3 years ago

A truly beautiful piece of writing. I am in awe. I would love to write like this!

Thank you to you both

K

AltissimusAltissimus11 months ago

Poetic flow, vivid imagery, masterfully written.

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A writer of mostly urban erotica, with more café scenes than a classic French movie; occasional departures to more fantastic worlds, off planet and on.