All Comments on 'Their Wonderful Brother'

I wish there was a NON-sexual section for story's like this...

There was an attempt at build up, but ultimitly left too many questions even for an attempted piece of erotic literature, then when you get to the conclusion (sex), it doesnt even exist... just wham bham thank you mam (ie they fucked and it was great, the end)

Great potential mind you, wont dock you for that, but not enough story or... story to go along with the.... story

Yeah. That whole "wham, bam, thank you ma'am" thing is a hallmark of this author. You need to take his stories with a grain of salt.

Flawless ideas, terrible execution.

I concur with the others...that pretty much describes the entire story.

Loving brother saving his two (you mentioned a third, another chapter maybe) sisters from what he was able to escape. There was so much potential in a story here that goes beyond the sex of the last three or so paragraphs. Hopefully you can rework it to it's potential or someone else will take up the cause.

Please continue this story line

I gave the story 4 stars because it has potential, and you could easily write more chapters; but the first chapter is too short for me.

Well the story had a really nice plot, and while I think it was moving along nicelyit seemed to reach a point where the author either got tired of it or ran out of imagination, because all of a sudden it was just a hurried rush to a pointless ending. The story could use a good rewrite. Thanks for writing it though.

Would have really liked to see a follow up possibly adding the 3rd sister to the mix? Really liked the story though. To be honest, I like pretty much all your stories. :-)

If I was with my sister or just some girl and she made a comment like she did about wanting to be with me, and then the first chance she gets shes tongue deep in her sisters pussy and totally forgot about me?? As quietly as I could I'd get out of bed and leave them to it. Go watch T.V. Then when they did realize I was gone and came looking for me I tell my EX girl why are you out here? You say one thing and then do another. Kniw what that makes you? A liar. So get the fuck away from me and go eat our sisters pussy lying bitch