All Comments on 'Them's the Rules'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Meh

Points for effort, I guess, but really, not much happening here.

themanredthemanredover 5 years ago
I liked it a lot!

Love the term 'pillow princess city' and how it describes the hot, kind of bawdy act of a woman receiving so much oral sex. Fun story!

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