All Comments on 'Thespian Love'

I have done many, many community theatre productions, and it is truly amazing how often this kind of thing happens. Your ability to capture it is very good. I'd say the dialogue needs work, but the narrative sections are quite strong. Well done.

Your writing is excellent, and I loved this story. But, really surprised why there are so few comments. 5*

What great fun to be had at the village am dram so and they certainly got a

Ot of rehearsing done on the play then put a lot of practice in the bed....a lot of fun was had until it all went pear shaped but at least them two had a fulfilling life together......I loved the humour in it and it rolled along at a steady pace.....well done

and it does happen in AM DRAM knew a doctors wife who was screwing one of the lads in the players which she had persuaded him to go to just to screw her.....

Well devised and I enjoyed the story