by searchingforperfection
Excellent story. This is precisely the kind of buildup I love. This gives it a realistic feeling. I hate those stories that goes into banging in the third or fourth paragraph. The wait is tough, but it is certainly worth it.
Keep it up man!
still no incest or taboo this would be better in the nonerotic area not long enough for the novels area
A good tease of a story. One page of reading, and obvious advancement of the plot. Keep it up!
And mcollect, I definitely understand the impatience. :D But, three chapters (pages) in three days isn't bad. As long as it continues. ;-)
Actually, I submitted all six parts at once. There really is a vetting process.