All Comments on 'Things My Sister Had Ch. 03'

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mcollectmcollectover 13 years ago
A slow start is good

But, please hurry with the next chapter.

rendezvous_360rendezvous_360over 13 years ago
Excellent buildup

Excellent story. This is precisely the kind of buildup I love. This gives it a realistic feeling. I hate those stories that goes into banging in the third or fourth paragraph. The wait is tough, but it is certainly worth it.

Keep it up man!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
no incest/taboo

still no incest or taboo this would be better in the nonerotic area not long enough for the novels area

stevaroonistevarooniover 13 years ago
Excellent pacing

A good tease of a story. One page of reading, and obvious advancement of the plot. Keep it up!

And mcollect, I definitely understand the impatience. :D But, three chapters (pages) in three days isn't bad. As long as it continues. ;-)

searchingforperfectionsearchingforperfectionover 13 years agoAuthor
Be patient

Actually, I submitted all six parts at once. There really is a vetting process.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
*****

interesting style, please keep it up

new_readernew_readeralmost 10 years ago

Man, its almost funny the way this is going.

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