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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Yech!

In all respects.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
get a dictionary

Very poor grammar but the story idea has merit

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Get an editor!!

From the first sentence!!! She was laying on her back, not prone. Supine is on the back.

prop69prop69over 7 years ago
nice surprize

we need chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

editor editor editor you need one bad

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