All Comments on 'Third Year After Ch. 03'

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tjb50caltjb50calover 7 years ago
awesome series

here is a suggestion for Matts job....why not combine the automotive and furniture business together......its trendy to make furniture out of classic car sections.....plus furniture is needed in RVs campers etc....

as always looking forward to reading more of your great writing and this awesome love story series

bawsweatbawsweatover 7 years ago
Point...

You are doing a fine job of working through this, BUT....take another look at your dialog - some of it (maybe most of it) is very unrealistic, does not sound like a conversation at all.

Only a handful of spelling/grammar problems, so kudos for that!

spotteddick100spotteddick100over 7 years ago
Great story

thank for you taking the time to write for us. really enjoy your story.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aalmost 3 years ago

One of the best series I have ever read.

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