All Comments on 'This Could Be the Start Ch. 02'

You were definitely missed. Glad to see you haven't lost your erotic writing touch. This was definitely HOT!! Keep up the great work and don't make us wait so long for your next submission please. The Princess

Congratulations! Another winner from a talented writer whose mastery of the language and erotica can hold his fans and provide so much for us to enjoy and ponder. Thankyou for your work and effort and look forward to more of this little cadre of sexy people.

Great theme - I enjoy the focus on the ivy tattoo. What a picture that springs to mind!

Very good. But what about the Ball? Who won? Obviously there's another chapter coming, and I can't wait. Hope it comes soon.

Painted a wonderful portrait of the people and situation - I was able to visualize every step -

Great work -

Pulling the finish together was awesome too - which Mom was it heh.

LOL Grat. almost need a part 3 where all 3 move to their "Nudist/fetish" farm in Idaho.

Forgot. Faith's dream of them at 35 yrs. old with mystery woman was really Faith's daughter.

Great Story needs more chapters