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SaxAndCollSaxAndCollover 5 years ago
Great Work

I’m liking the premise of this one so far, excellently done. Hope to see a continuation of the spelling-related nightmares herein.

AntidariusAntidariusover 5 years ago
Great start!

You write well, and you build anticipation steadily. Looking forward to the next installment :)

jcus0511jcus0511almost 2 years ago

Like your style & the way the lead is a bit naughty but has an inquiring mind. Looking forward to reading the rest of this yarn. Cheers

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