All Comments on 'This Is Our Story - Epilogue'

Man, I’m sad to see this end, but...”TIOS Volume I”! As in, more volumes to come! Can’t wait to see what you do with Jordan now that he knows about the Hailey/Hayleigh swap, not to mention the incredible powers of TIOS. Part of me is really hoping we find out how TIOS became so powerful, but the other part wants it to remain a mystery. Regardless, I’m sure you’ll make it super compelling!

Missing your writing already!

SaxAndColl

The story was just getting good and it ended? It's disappointing. And who cares about Jordan? So many possibilities left hanging.

I don't know what volume II will bring but the epilogue doesn't give me hope.

In fact, Volume II is already written and available on my amazon page at https://www.amazon.com/Isaac-Byrne/e/B0711SGVVH. I'd have linked to it in the story but the good people at literotica have a strong policy against allowing authors to promote their work and, ya know, live. :P

I definitely had a ton of fun writing in this world, but IMO it is only enhanced by gaining a genuine antagonist instead of mere moral conundrums. Only so long one can watch Conner fumble along figuring out what (if anything) to do with such a tool before concluding he's either a believable jerk or a boring protagonist. At any rate, working on volume 3 (3OS) now, but 2 is already there and waiting.

So yeah,I see that Volume 2 is already up, but i don't know if it the right place to ask, Do you have any thought to release each volume II chapter in literotica in the future when Volume III is released?

Connor plainly should have made "the least sincere apology" that Jordan had ever given into Jordan's Yearbook quote.