All Comments on 'This was Only the First Time'

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mitchawamitchawaalmost 4 years ago
Love Story.

Excellent writing, slow but powerful plot. characters well described, her emotions were shown perfectly, and the long seduction with messages and pictures led to a nicely told sex scene. I'm assuming a second chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Heart throbbing

I was completely drawn into the story and the payoff in the end was excellent. The writing and plot is amazing.

chytownchytownalmost 4 years ago
Great Piece Of Writing*****

Very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.

afosi2604afosi2604almost 2 years ago

Well done, enjoyable and only shortcoming is that there is not more.

txcrackertxcracker5 months ago
AS Good This Time AS The First time I read iT !

AS Good This Time AS The First time I read IT !

Thanks

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Reading erotica has always been one of my favorite things. I remember many quiet nights lying naked reading stories like the ones I am writing now. I wanted to thank everyone who has read my stories. Every comment that I get inspires me to write more. I hope everyone enjo...