by DG Hear
dont like the husband for cheating, but you got to wonder what the fuck is wrong with the wife. whatever she is doing, she is a stupid bitch. to be honest, sounds like she has been lying to him from the start. i kinda hope thats how it turns out. of course, i hope he gets the last laugh too. lol!
one partner decides to live his own life, his way. TK U MLJ LV NV
but given her attitude long before he did, it was amazing that he didn't do it sooner. Now maybe he should have left or divorced her then, but the fact that felt so much remorse he didn't or couldn't do it anymore did not give her the right to torment him for so many years. DG, you've made us curious as to the why of her being so irrational. Will the last chapter explain ?
He seems to be such an excellent bed partner that it is hard to understand his wife's problem. Being so patient makes him a wuss for many people. As I previously commented to me it just makes him an average 70+ (I know he is supposed to be 58, but then he would have had different attitudes)
Onward and upward....
this is just dull. I've stuck with it because DG is a GOOD writer with good stories, but this one leaves me cold.
The 'hero' of this story is a very horrible person. I don't care what happens to him. He is worse than his ex-wife he is fucking married women, doesn't he know any single women?
Great story! To bad some people don't see the story the way it is meant to be seen. I guess they are narrow minded. Please keep up the great work. Thanks!
The story has gotten better since the divorce. Sex is important to some people and not at all important to others. That can make for a lot of tension in a marriage and if the man and wife (or one of them) just don't like the other then it can get pretty miserable. Looking forward to what is revealed in the last chapter about his ex wife.
We male people died earlier than the women do. So a healthy elder man could find enough partners. However to change partners continously will become a boring lonely life after some years.
If he did not leave his earlier good job he could have travelled to Europe, Australia, Thailand, Bali, Bora Bora, Kenya, Peru,China, or Mexico.
So Bob goes from sexual pauper to player . Nice ( except for adultery ) ! At least he's nor a quisling. Usually I root for reconcilliation . Not so much , this time ! Thx to author for semi - salvaging this saga.
Finally we get to the erotic. It's great that he is NOT sitting around drinking and crying like so many husbands in LW stories. It seems he's a super stud, which is a bit goofy but OK. I don't find it boring. This was probably the best chapter.
I still wonder WTF was up with his ex? Maybe she's just a bitch but I keep waiting for "the rest of the story". She's still around so I expect there's a reason. It's obviously far past reconciliation, thank God, so it only matters to satisfy curiosity.
It seems as even though he is having a lot of sex he isn't that happy.
Looking for the next chapter
Thanks for the read
Worth a five. Great effort. Glad to see you utilizing an editor
Fuck, not the author I remember. Boring, stupid sex. I skimmed through this.
I wouldn't have written chapter 4
Either. Nothing would have happened then either. All he did was whine! No fire no emotion, no story.
they are happier, enjoying the company of others, and better off.
Maybe it's me but I don't like that he is fooling around with married women. He seems to be doing well with single women so why fuck around? Maybe next chapter a jealous husband comes and makes him pay.
Nah I guess not. Last chapter...
Should have thanked Carol for leaving him as he he is enjoying his life to the full.
It's too bad she made him suffer so long for his indiscretion and that he stayed and took it. By not admitting at the time she was finished with him she ruined both of their lives. What a mean, nasty, spiteful woman. He should have ended it long before she finally pulled the plug. Too bad.
it's funny but all of your main DGH characters in all of your stories, are absolutely the only pussy eaters in the world.
And all the women they meet have never had cunnilingus.
Ew. I was prepared to like the story but he's an asshole who fucked a married woman and felt justified to do so.
1 star, and wish I could give it -10