All Comments on 'Three Is Better Pt. 01'

by scarlettshea86

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

"Matt and I laid down"

No you didn't. You 'lay' down.

Is there anyone here who knows the difference?

wron01wron01about 9 years ago

Sweet little story that stops in the middle. I presume a sequel is planned.

BTW, "Matt and I laid down" is correct. The difference? 'lay down' is the present tense of the verb phrase "to lay down", while 'laid down' is the preterite tense, which is in keeping with the rest of the story.

scarlettshea86scarlettshea86about 9 years agoAuthor

Thank you @wron01!

oldhippie1949oldhippie1949about 9 years ago
good...

...as much as you do.

mojorisin1967mojorisin1967about 9 years ago
Very nice!

Thanks for posting. We can't wait for the next chapters.

RobbieDarcyRobbieDarcyabout 9 years ago
I Love Part 1

This is a great start to the story. You really build the sexual tension very well and I can really feel that you two are desperate for Amanda to join you both. I'm so glad Amanda said yes!

Gotham84Gotham84about 9 years ago
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looking foward to part 2....

loveloverloveloveralmost 7 years ago
Simple, direct

Yes, said Amanda, I want that. I'm attracted to both of you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Meh

Too quickly getting into bed. There was no build up.

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