All Comments on 'Three Tales from the Incest Inn'

Not bad, I'll admit I hadn't read the entire story yet, but I can already see that it's pretty well-written. The idea is rather original, but it's also a bit too similar to something I had in my backlog for three years or so, so, well, you kinda beat me to it in publishing this :D. Still, love to see a concept like this turned into an actual, full-length story.

Meh...so-so. When I read the following, I already had 95% of the ending figured out:

"And finally a mother and a daughter will arrive seeking someone from far away."

The first interlude with the brother/sister incest was a bit awkward. The way that it was written, they should have already been making love long before reaching the inn. I realize that their first intimate time had to be at the inn for the story to have any purpose, so a rewrite is definitely called for in the build up before arriving. You had them described in such a way that reaching the inn was anticlimactic.

The second interlude was nearly just as awkward. I got frustrated to the point where I skipped past the entire second section before the mother and son met up with each other to make the trip. Mother/son incest stories do not pique my interests to begin with.

The son having sexual intercourse with his mother in the third section wasn't detracting and I was fine with that. But again, I was mainly reading this for the brother/sister intimacy anyway. I'm glad that she took Rhys first before the mother did. However, I really couldn't buy into the reactions of the characters when they checked into the inn. Surely Rhys recognized them from the moment that he laid eyes on them. They should have recognized him too! The whole thing with the questions to establish that they were back on earth became silly and stupid. 🙄

It's pretty obvious that you didn't bother to outline your story before you started writing it. The whole game plan sucked. 😒 3/5

Mark and Sarah! ❤️😍

Sexy and unique. Loved it!

How was he only 2yrs old and his mom and sister both old enough to be working on a interdemonsional device? He would be atleast 20 yrs younger than his sister.

Great cummed twice

interesting premise. It feels like this could have been 2 different stories really.

Loved it !

Was good, I somehow feel the sex scenes were rushed almost like watching a porn on 3x speed up,. Otherwise had good build up I'll put you in my list to read other works