All Comments on 'Three Way Love Making'

by k5d2003

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MikeyDred61MikeyDred61over 7 years ago
Oh my god so hot

Loved this story. So erotic on so many levels.

Ray RobertsRay Robertsover 7 years ago
Short, sharp and to the point.

Me too I only wish we had a friend like Chris!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
HOT

This is what it is all about,Thanks and more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good start

The perspective begins as if describing a fantasy, but shifts about to the conclusion, creating some, but not severe confusion. Also, Ken and Chris's names are overworked and often not required for readability.

The subject is fine, and the mechanics (or ins and outs) work. Keep it up!

AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopover 7 years ago
Great fun

Nice arousing story xoxoxoxo Annette

dustybluesdustybluesover 7 years ago
Makes my cock hard,, .well Done Leah

A 5 star, great Story Leah,,,,,,,,,, Ken and Chris are two lucky guys.......

nudeinthewildnudeinthewildover 6 years ago
Nice MM action

Liked the MM contact in this, a good threesome really does need interaction between the guys. Good cock stiffening stuff

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Fine tuned

Story made me feel like I need to try the same thing with my husband.

scltfellowscltfellowabout 6 years ago
Hot action

Really enjoyed this story. The MM action was as hot as the wife sharing aspect.

26thNC26thNCalmost 6 years ago
If

If sharing is caring, then I don't care.

CathyhappywifeCathyhappywifeover 1 year ago

Very sexy story. I loved the male/male contact. Well written. I would love to see more stories from you!

Westman99Westman99over 1 year ago

I read the story you wrote first (Gallery) and thought it was a lot better. I felt the action here was a bit too quick and the description not as good. As someone else had pointed out it gets a bit confusing in places.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I do hope you write more. I know you want to write fiction, your stories here are hot, your fiction will be hotter!

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Nudist Female living in UK now. formally Australia Have posted my first story called The Gallery. Now I have 4 others published here. I'm a nude model, artist and writer. All my stories are based on real life events and tell a little of my sexual story.