by k5d2003
Me too I only wish we had a friend like Chris!
The perspective begins as if describing a fantasy, but shifts about to the conclusion, creating some, but not severe confusion. Also, Ken and Chris's names are overworked and often not required for readability.
The subject is fine, and the mechanics (or ins and outs) work. Keep it up!
A 5 star, great Story Leah,,,,,,,,,, Ken and Chris are two lucky guys.......
Liked the MM contact in this, a good threesome really does need interaction between the guys. Good cock stiffening stuff
Story made me feel like I need to try the same thing with my husband.
Really enjoyed this story. The MM action was as hot as the wife sharing aspect.
Very sexy story. I loved the male/male contact. Well written. I would love to see more stories from you!
I read the story you wrote first (Gallery) and thought it was a lot better. I felt the action here was a bit too quick and the description not as good. As someone else had pointed out it gets a bit confusing in places.
I do hope you write more. I know you want to write fiction, your stories here are hot, your fiction will be hotter!