All Comments on 'Throwaway'

..... you've laid excellent groundwork..... not the rest of the story....

An excellent premise for a major story series. You could have gone into more detail when he wandered into his dream world during the first couple of times--the bit about being a shaman and all that kinda seemed to come out of nowhere. Otherwise, an excellent start for an interesting series of stories.

what kind of shit you were on when you wrote this, but it must have been good :)

I hope you don't run out of it too soon, 'cause I would like a couple more chapters.

Lynn

I get it. Finally buried with full Military Honors, He is Home. Five Stars.