All Comments on 'Thunder and Lightning'

I wonder when the next thunderstorm is, I need to have an event like this.

This is probably one of the best written stories I have read on this site. Perfectly timed, wasnt rushed...and erotic and passionate.

I too would of liked to be there for that next storm.

Well done indeed!!!!

and have her get knocked up too :)

for the memories of my step-daughter!

I have to agree with RavenOnCa, as being one of the best stories I've read. It wasn't rushed at all, letting me appreciate the way you set the stage regarding background producing a slow and steady buildup. It was erotic, passionate, and written with all the love and feeling a father would have for his daughter. Given her feelings toward him, I would say a relationship between them would definately set into motion a new found love and begin a new chapter in their lives. This story left me wanting a daughter with simular feelings toward thunder and lightning storms. Definately well done!

The pace of the story was perfect, and it reads smoothly, and flows well to make reading a pleasure.

I like the slow build up and then having the story end with he and his daughter finally consummating a very good sexual and love encounter.

Well done

This was just an outstanding daddy/daughter tale. Thanks for sharing such a well written story with us. DEFINITELY 5 STARS!

This one is excellent. Thanks for continuing to write!

Five stars is not enough!

I DON'T THINK I'D WANT TO SEE HER GET "KNOCKED UP"! ONE ASSUMES THESE DAYS, THAT THE GAL KNOWS HOW TO TAKE CARE OF HERSELF. AND AS LONG AS SHE DOES - THERE'S NO HARM. NO ONE GETS HURT!. BESIDES, THIS IS FICTION. AND THE STORY FLOWS VERY SMOOTHLY AND KEEPS ONE ON THE EDGE OF THEIR SEAT. VERY HOT!!

This is a sexy hot story. Would like to read more of this daddy and daughter pleasure but no babies yet. Lots of fun first.

Very good read. 5 stars. Please write more.

Another good one, well deserving of the stars.

Ginger.xxx

Now that's how a Daddy loves his Princess! Very hot. After reading this story, I definitely need some Daddy time!!!

it takes skill to fit such a hot story into 2 pages.

WELL THIS WAS VARY NICELY WRITING STORY AND THE POINT IS IT COULD BE

REAL LIFE SITUATION I KNOW A FEW GIRLS THAT DON'T LIKE STORMS,GREAT READING AND LOVE SEX PARTS AT THR RIGHT TIME,NOW I GIVE THIS 5 PLUS STARS MORE BUT THATS AS HIGH AS IT GO'S,JUST HOPE THE NEXT CHAPTER

IN THERE LIVES CONTINUEIT MAKE FORGOOD READING TO SEE HOW FAR ONE CAN PUSH THE LIMITS........................................"R".................................

Nothing as comforting during thunderstorms than the warm safety of Daddy...

brought back memories of Daddy comforting me when big ugly storms were brewing and showing me that not all thunder and lightning was bad. thanks for the walk down memory lane

I'd certainly like to read more of this Father/Daughter team. Brilliant writing!

Five Stars.

as i may have said in an earlier comment, the best part of incest stories is the long, slow tease that brings the characters to cross that un-crossable line, and this story was all that and a bag of chips. the pace, dialogue and descriptions we're perfect. five stars isn't nearly enough.

Jaysus, I have two sons, but, if they were girls, we would have done the deed years ago. Erotic masterpiece!

SO THE FRIGID BITCH GETS A BF!! HE SHOULD HAVE BURNED THE BITCH JANET!!

Wow, just awesome. But too short