All Comments on 'Time'

Why didn't you let the story develop with the loving submission?

I think it's explained rather well in the story: "...while your plan to surprise me had its merits, it would be best for me to give myself to you without bonds, without a blindfold, so that there was no question that my actions were truly genuine."

I would have enjoyed the bondage as well, but this choice does make it more in line with reality!

My only complaint is that it is too short, both in the lead up to the sex and in the sex itself. But overall a good story.

truly touching. it doesn't always have to be all about the sex and the ropes and bondage. what you wrote is truly erotic and sensual. It touched me truly and love is like that in real life. Bravo!!!